Friday, January 20, 2012

Radiance [five sentence fiction]

Her eyes were shining brightly with a few unshed tears, a huge smile on her face. It had been so long and she knew he was afraid she had forgotten. How could she forget, there was no one like him in her life. She got closer and saw his eyes were shining brightly with a few unshed tears, a huge smile on his face. She jumped into his arms proudly proclaiming, "Daddy!"

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5 comments:

  1. Oh that is so sweet, quite the opposite of mine ;)

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  2. Such a sweet, touching piece. Well done!!

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  3. Aw, lovely. She seems like a very precocious child, too!

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