tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post2125919655579830828..comments2023-04-14T05:46:16.714-04:00Comments on DB McNicol, Author: Orange [five sentence fiction]Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-1879484950508521432012-06-01T00:13:50.000-04:002012-06-01T00:13:50.000-04:00I really admire those who are good at flash fictio...I really admire those who are good at flash fiction. I'm not so much. I'm not known for brevity. But this sounds like fun and I should work on this; I'll give it a try. The word is orange? Five sentences. Another couple of cups of coffee and I should be able to come up with something...Doughttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14804800410041909511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-27104594686717241422012-06-01T02:42:08.000-04:002012-06-01T02:42:08.000-04:00A lump formed in his throat as he watched the fram...A lump formed in his throat as he watched the frame building burn; orange, red and vermillion illuminating the night. Wood crackled and hissed, glass shattered as pieces fell inward, collapsing. The fire consumed the house, and the memories; all those memories. Was it wrong? No, she deserved it: burn witch, burn.<br> * * * * *<br><br>Please don't ask where that came from... I have NO idea.Doughttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14804800410041909511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-27532494608647451922012-06-01T06:07:39.000-04:002012-06-01T06:07:39.000-04:00Doug, that was great. Go post it on your own blog...Doug, that was great. Go post it on your own blog and then link that up over at Five-Sentence Fiction.Jayne Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01053366144206401836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-87370924815511983872012-06-01T06:09:31.000-04:002012-06-01T06:09:31.000-04:00Donna, I loved this. Great sense of action and us...Donna, I loved this. Great sense of action and use of the prompt. And I happen to really love owls. :)Jayne Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01053366144206401836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-82360636362118744272012-06-01T06:10:47.000-04:002012-06-01T06:10:47.000-04:00Doug, I agree with Jayne, that was great. Definite...Doug, I agree with Jayne, that was great. Definitely put it on your blog, add yourself to the Linky List (click the Five Sentence Fiction image) and join in the weekly fun!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-57044499766851644752012-06-01T06:11:40.000-04:002012-06-01T06:11:40.000-04:00I saved off a bunch of photos but those eyes just ...I saved off a bunch of photos but those eyes just grabbed me and pulled me in. I wrote this really late last night, just glad to pull something off so quickly. LOL! Still have to start reading the others. Thanks!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-14225858389142768512012-06-01T06:13:40.000-04:002012-06-01T06:13:40.000-04:00very nice action piece!very nice action piece!Lynn Proctorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16349867270815243053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-38971059674521036632012-06-01T22:41:01.000-04:002012-06-01T22:41:01.000-04:00Wow! Those brilliant eyes... who can ignore them? ...Wow! Those brilliant eyes... who can ignore them? I was also mesmerised by those eyes! <br>The pic and flash fiction - a great combo!michellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-16550922357421226132012-06-02T05:30:20.000-04:002012-06-02T05:30:20.000-04:00I felt as if I were the owl, with those mesmerizin...I felt as if I were the owl, with those mesmerizing eyes, sharp skills, and pressing hunger!Britton Minorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04095446985643011393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-68101420140115814242012-06-03T19:52:22.000-04:002012-06-03T19:52:22.000-04:00Aloha Doug: This is also my first try with Lillie...Aloha Doug: This is also my first try with Lillie McFerrin's Five Sentence Fiction. Who said you're not good at flash fiction? I've read oddles of your sh. stories and they are always wonderful. Here's mine...as you probably know by heart by now: www.triplemoonstar.blogspot.comLora's ~ Journalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09627397950284112758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-33994227753011223032012-06-03T19:55:37.000-04:002012-06-03T19:55:37.000-04:00Hi Donna: Neat little story. I also love owls and...Hi Donna: Neat little story. I also love owls and have an eclectic collection of crystal ones. Btw, love your blogspot format...which template are you using? I'm getting bored with mine. Thanks for visiting my orange story.Lora's ~ Journalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09627397950284112758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-71230800898279234342012-06-04T15:16:51.000-04:002012-06-04T15:16:51.000-04:00I have to agree! I think you do quite well with fl...I have to agree! I think you do quite well with flash fiction :) Nice job, Doug!!lilliemcferrin.comhttp://lilliemcferrin.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-23805984537103425012012-06-04T15:18:38.000-04:002012-06-04T15:18:38.000-04:00Owls are one of my favorite animals!! Awesome take...Owls are one of my favorite animals!! Awesome take on the prompt. :)lilliemcferrin.comhttp://lilliemcferrin.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-8535137585654413332012-06-05T22:38:25.000-04:002012-06-05T22:38:25.000-04:00Excellent take on the prompt and such a lovely pho...Excellent take on the prompt and such a lovely photo too.Sandra Crookhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-50022743880568733532012-06-06T06:15:19.000-04:002012-06-06T06:15:19.000-04:00Thanks for all the comments, everyone. I really ap...Thanks for all the comments, everyone. I really appreciate it!!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.com