tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post2795849384850685016..comments2023-04-14T05:46:16.714-04:00Comments on DB McNicol, Author: Lightning Flashed [flash fiction]Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-82972743742991188412012-05-21T05:57:20.000-04:002012-05-21T05:57:20.000-04:00Great entry! I love how different everyone's s...Great entry! I love how different everyone's stories are! Thanks for posting.Summer Rosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-38547026342964111702012-05-21T06:12:50.000-04:002012-05-21T06:12:50.000-04:00Thank you for entering my 2nd Annual Flash Fiction...Thank you for entering my 2nd Annual Flash Fiction Blogfest! The six finalists will be announced on Friday, May 25th. I will further comment on your entry on Thursday.Cherie Reichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16663147386014122939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-83397632577228887492012-05-21T07:20:14.000-04:002012-05-21T07:20:14.000-04:00Very imaginative! I like how you wove a whole que...Very imaginative! I like how you wove a whole quest saga into a tight 300 words -- very nice.Chris Frieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07341440379767694905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-53469020912896764762012-05-21T07:34:23.000-04:002012-05-21T07:34:23.000-04:00Yes, this is an amazing amount of action for 300 w...Yes, this is an amazing amount of action for 300 words! Nice writing and very interesting story. Good luck! :)Amy L. Sonnichsenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11358456786727534289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-86367753637281428932012-05-21T07:43:59.000-04:002012-05-21T07:43:59.000-04:00Fantastic post, such a great story in such a tiny ...Fantastic post, such a great story in such a tiny amount of words. Thanks for sharing with us :)Laurahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01062140902302914114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-69934125498676988702012-05-21T13:38:45.000-04:002012-05-21T13:38:45.000-04:00Thanks everyone, glad you enjoyed it. I am loving ...Thanks everyone, glad you enjoyed it. I am loving checking out the wide variety of great stories. And we still have two more days...wow!!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-88355232913877083992012-05-21T15:40:14.000-04:002012-05-21T15:40:14.000-04:00Nicely done. Well, I'm trying the Flash Ficti...Nicely done. Well, I'm trying the Flash Fiction Blogfest, Donna. I'm feeling brave. Gave it a go and threw it out there for the world to tromp on!Donnahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-19427011111926131512012-05-21T15:42:00.000-04:002012-05-21T15:42:00.000-04:00Very unique!Very unique!Heather Murphyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11847855601653718033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-16569992827560214932012-05-21T16:28:11.000-04:002012-05-21T16:28:11.000-04:00This was great. It made me feel like I was watchi...This was great. It made me feel like I was watching a movie :)<br><br>I loved the ending.<br><br>AndreaAndrea Teaganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02050710871603076745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-59256633331648904812012-05-22T03:05:55.000-04:002012-05-22T03:05:55.000-04:00So much happens in 300 words. This could easily be...So much happens in 300 words. This could easily be expanded to saga levels. Great job. Thanks for the story.Von L Cidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05792116471895008377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-81531237928050424692012-05-22T03:55:26.000-04:002012-05-22T03:55:26.000-04:00This flowed so wonderfully. I can't believe yo...This flowed so wonderfully. I can't believe you told so much in so few words.Danielle B.http://www.blogger.com/profile/11026644605799767199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-22736184110712512232012-05-22T05:29:05.000-04:002012-05-22T05:29:05.000-04:00This is really great on its own, and yet also feel...This is really great on its own, and yet also feels like it could be the beginning of something much larger.M Pepper Langlinaishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13464393340517511305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-58626601264849338662012-05-22T08:38:18.000-04:002012-05-22T08:38:18.000-04:00I'm going to agree with M Pepper up there. I h...I'm going to agree with M Pepper up there. I hope you're planning on fleshing this out to a full short story or more. =)Crystal Collierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-375165422803494732012-05-22T12:17:52.000-04:002012-05-22T12:17:52.000-04:00Yes, it's a well structured piece with resolut...Yes, it's a well structured piece with resolution, but I would love to know more about the world you've created.Mary Maddoxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11804303876835029488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-17890385162220496762012-05-22T16:20:31.000-04:002012-05-22T16:20:31.000-04:00Again, thank you all for you kind comments. Now I&...Again, thank you all for you kind comments. Now I'll have to consider the idea of doing something more with this at some future date. ;-)Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-84176398124026128052012-05-22T19:10:13.000-04:002012-05-22T19:10:13.000-04:00Interesting and very descriptive. Very nice all ar...Interesting and very descriptive. Very nice all around.farawayeyeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-72798793891322582522012-05-23T06:13:04.000-04:002012-05-23T06:13:04.000-04:00Interesting. A whole epic told in 300 words. I lik...Interesting. A whole epic told in 300 words. I liked itNephylimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12677130973931453911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-3101624048609625852012-05-23T17:24:06.000-04:002012-05-23T17:24:06.000-04:00Very nice flow and description, with a powerful en...Very nice flow and description, with a powerful ending. Great entry!Michael Piercehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03060064276650474244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-65570385335292346272012-05-23T17:40:12.000-04:002012-05-23T17:40:12.000-04:00Nice twist. ^_^Nice twist. ^_^Misha Gerickehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-50306670502082346382012-05-23T20:17:49.000-04:002012-05-23T20:17:49.000-04:00You have packed so much into your 300 words. Love ...You have packed so much into your 300 words. Love that it has a clear conclusion!Julie DeGuiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00223163526525906669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-8110498447488811472012-05-24T03:53:24.000-04:002012-05-24T03:53:24.000-04:00Once again, thanks everyone for visiting and takin...Once again, thanks everyone for visiting and taking time to read my tale! Off to read more Lightning Flashed stories.....Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-49631528234699316952012-05-24T06:23:18.000-04:002012-05-24T06:23:18.000-04:00Wow! This sounds like a great introduction to a no...Wow! This sounds like a great introduction to a novel or something like that. I would love to see more. Great job!<br><br>I'll announce the finalists tomorrow.Cherie Reichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16663147386014122939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-58371283522309800462012-05-24T07:46:44.000-04:002012-05-24T07:46:44.000-04:00excellent scene! i'd love to know more!excellent scene! i'd love to know more!Tara Tylerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-12616003097023671312012-05-24T14:19:47.000-04:002012-05-24T14:19:47.000-04:00I was going to say what Cherie said; that this sel...I was going to say what Cherie said; that this self-contained tale could be the prelude to a sweeping sage. I'd love to read more about a female Chosen One! :-)<br><br><a href="http://minalobo.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Some Dark Romantic</a>Mina Lobohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10173895884776280826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-33532027966007534062012-05-25T04:55:40.000-04:002012-05-25T04:55:40.000-04:00Thanks everyone for reading and commenting. I'...Thanks everyone for reading and commenting. I'll be saving this for a prologue for a future novel/novelette.<br><br>I hope you all have visited Cherie's page and checked out her six finalists. Some amazing writing...I had a hard time choosing just one!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.com