tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post502029537662904260..comments2023-04-14T05:46:16.714-04:00Comments on DB McNicol, Author: Future - A to Z Blog HopDonna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-23971345808064510142012-04-06T00:29:32.000-04:002012-04-06T00:29:32.000-04:00I really liked the 3rd paragraph, fitted well with...I really liked the 3rd paragraph, fitted well with the photo.sjphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05772883091207430753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-31553066780346526422012-04-06T03:37:27.000-04:002012-04-06T03:37:27.000-04:00Oooooo, nice. I kinda suspected he was dead by the...Oooooo, nice. I kinda suspected he was dead by the second paragraph.Bish Denhamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13359927719391990534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-44466446659848965962012-04-06T05:50:57.000-04:002012-04-06T05:50:57.000-04:00great short! Glad he was okay with his fate regar...great short! Glad he was okay with his fate regardless of the outcome!<br>-MJ A to Z blogger<br>http://creativelyspiltink.blogspot.com/MJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04647627174443420783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-8508182872423025992012-04-06T07:03:22.000-04:002012-04-06T07:03:22.000-04:00makes me wonder how he got there in the first plac...makes me wonder how he got there in the first place. Great A-Z post!<br>Nutschell<br>www.thewritingnut.comnutschellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10967710710805174781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-1656466215068846942012-04-06T07:15:49.000-04:002012-04-06T07:15:49.000-04:00very good. i like your theme... a challenge within...very good. i like your theme... a challenge within a challenge...danneromerohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09268830006681589842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-37398093799439555072012-04-06T09:54:51.000-04:002012-04-06T09:54:51.000-04:00I like the feeling of peace you end with. He may ...I like the feeling of peace you end with. He may be dead, he may not, but he is at peace with it either way. <br><br><a href="http://thewarriormuse.com/" rel="nofollow">Shannon at The Warrior Muse</a>, co-host of the <a href="http://www.a-to-zchallenge.com/" rel="nofollow">2012 #atozchallenge</a>! Twitter: @AprilA2ZShannon Lawrencehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00934641808195675935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-12204832380455391152012-04-06T11:43:08.000-04:002012-04-06T11:43:08.000-04:00I like the mystery behind this. What caused him to...I like the mystery behind this. What caused him to forget what happened after the lone gunman caused him to hit the panic button?<br>Ciara Knight<br>www.ciaraknight.com<br>Go A to Z!Ciarahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15628488753277495111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-7444234662854091592012-04-06T14:14:03.000-04:002012-04-06T14:14:03.000-04:00This story gave me goosebumps--not in a bad way. S...This story gave me goosebumps--not in a bad way. So much in this short story, and I love that his (possibly final) memories are of love, comfort and peace. This is lovely.Kern Windwraithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16771591425163484238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-17480017006226938142012-04-06T14:49:39.000-04:002012-04-06T14:49:39.000-04:00Apparently I read too much science fiction, becaus...Apparently I read too much science fiction, because I didn't even consider that he might be dead until I read the last few paragraphs. Very interesting! Would love to know what you were thinking when you wrote it! He is dead, right?Stephaniehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00420841652300294215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-32737284971057518842012-04-06T14:56:59.000-04:002012-04-06T14:56:59.000-04:00>>He is dead, right?<<I tried to leave...>>He is dead, right?<<<br><br>I tried to leave that open to YOUR interpretation...now if I were to expand it into a short story, it could go several ways. ;-)<br><br>Thanks to everyone for your wonderful comments...as I re-read this, I could still edit it. Nothing is ever perfect, is it. LOL!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-36731461814382387732012-04-06T16:17:38.000-04:002012-04-06T16:17:38.000-04:00I'm so glad he felt love. Much better than the...I'm so glad he felt love. Much better than the alternative! Thanks again for your kind comment on my blog.Beth Zimmermanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07047047792782914757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-89447286145354148952012-04-06T16:18:35.000-04:002012-04-06T16:18:35.000-04:00P.S. ... I just noticed your theme! Good luck!P.S. ... I just noticed your theme! Good luck!Beth Zimmermanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07047047792782914757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-84114928304731716842012-04-07T05:55:31.000-04:002012-04-07T05:55:31.000-04:00Cool picture. Interesting post.Cool picture. Interesting post.Cherylhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03968140694063198220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-59049640346879534712012-04-07T17:37:28.000-04:002012-04-07T17:37:28.000-04:00Family and home cooking... exactly where I go in d...Family and home cooking... exactly where I go in dire moments. Really enjoying your A to Z work!Tia Bachhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18336780518125138789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-9057074007445306422012-04-09T12:01:14.000-04:002012-04-09T12:01:14.000-04:00It is an interesting challenge..except for "H...It is an interesting challenge..except for "H" when I cheated a bit. LOL!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-42688183256119544042012-04-09T12:01:47.000-04:002012-04-09T12:01:47.000-04:00Thanks for visiting, Cheryl. Off to check out your...Thanks for visiting, Cheryl. Off to check out your blog!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-22420211433967976982012-04-09T12:02:32.000-04:002012-04-09T12:02:32.000-04:00Thanks, Tia. It's not perfect. I have seen thi...Thanks, Tia. It's not perfect. I have seen things I need to change later. Flash fiction always can be tweaked, I've found.Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-8357869483977871702012-04-09T14:34:41.000-04:002012-04-09T14:34:41.000-04:00There are few things I can say with certainty, but...There are few things I can say with certainty, but I know this... it'll never be perfect. I have to remember this, too, because I hate trying to figure out when to stop editing!Tia Bachhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18336780518125138789noreply@blogger.com