tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post8771146763800318501..comments2023-04-14T05:46:16.714-04:00Comments on DB McNicol, Author: Firefly Glitter [#Faerypin]Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-75721908368785679372012-05-28T09:46:21.000-04:002012-05-28T09:46:21.000-04:00So very awesome! I love this. And I enjoyed your o...So very awesome! I love this. And I enjoyed your other piece too although it was darker and more creepy. I really thought I commented. Happy Memorial Day, Donna!Beth Zimmermanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07047047792782914757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-78719025143551451342012-05-28T10:00:37.000-04:002012-05-28T10:00:37.000-04:00You were my only commenter, Beth, and I knew I cre...You were my only commenter, Beth, and I knew I creeped you out. LOL! Thanks so much for being such a faithful reader!!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-51946146728023911352012-05-28T11:59:04.000-04:002012-05-28T11:59:04.000-04:00That's the photo I was considering using! This...That's the photo I was considering using! This is so well written, and I just love the unknown ending. I want to know more!ajjrichmondhttp://angierichmond.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-60335217781654505912012-05-28T12:19:17.000-04:002012-05-28T12:19:17.000-04:00I love the images you've put in my head...danc...I love the images you've put in my head...dancing fireflies and an innocent young thing chasing after them! Wonder where they took her?Lisa Shambrookhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-80857817311775420792012-05-28T12:32:38.000-04:002012-05-28T12:32:38.000-04:00I wonder if there will be any doubles...will be in...I wonder if there will be any doubles...will be interesting.<br><br>I now have several tales that need to be expanded but need to get my two novels done first. LOL!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-72292408569531883762012-05-28T12:34:03.000-04:002012-05-28T12:34:03.000-04:00Thanks, Lisa. I could see her dancing around...I l...Thanks, Lisa. I could see her dancing around...I love fireflies myself. Not sure where they took her but someday I plan to find out!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-20069306429836051422012-05-28T13:10:24.000-04:002012-05-28T13:10:24.000-04:00Great story. I love "What's a future?&quo...Great story. I love "What's a future?"Mary Maddoxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11804303876835029488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-13027165030364877032012-05-28T14:14:36.000-04:002012-05-28T14:14:36.000-04:00It really helps to have young grandchildren around...It really helps to have young grandchildren around...LOL!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-82829977997289726662012-05-28T14:39:22.000-04:002012-05-28T14:39:22.000-04:00This captures youth and innocence beautifully, Don...This captures youth and innocence beautifully, Donna. Thank you for entering!Anna Meadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09004546178112127604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-65433904991966670052012-05-28T23:17:35.000-04:002012-05-28T23:17:35.000-04:00That was excellent. I wondered if she might be &qu...That was excellent. I wondered if she might be "punished" for putting the fireflies in a jar. Sorry Imissed your other entry - I've been back and read it.Cameron Writeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07745199648604340657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-30049081249334173992012-05-29T00:48:13.000-04:002012-05-29T00:48:13.000-04:00Wow, last line felt a little dark in comparison, l...Wow, last line felt a little dark in comparison, loved the light colourful mood, must say was caught up by several pinterest boards last night after your post few days back :)sjphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05772883091207430753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-37112111263306469242012-05-29T02:46:58.000-04:002012-05-29T02:46:58.000-04:00You and the other regulars continue to inspire me!...You and the other regulars continue to inspire me!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-64629699513573299702012-05-29T02:48:20.000-04:002012-05-29T02:48:20.000-04:00LOL! Never thought about the possible punishing, w...LOL! Never thought about the possible punishing, what a good twist that would be.<br><br>Thanks for checking out my other fantasy tale. We "bikers" & "van folks" gotta stick together!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-83272080764207792972012-05-29T02:49:48.000-04:002012-05-29T02:49:48.000-04:00Thanks for taking time to read and comment. The la...Thanks for taking time to read and comment. The last line seemed like a must for the folks left back at home. The original draft was much longer and went into foster parents left behind.<br><br>Yup, Pinterest gets ya hooked!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-59073728850450297622012-05-30T07:25:59.000-04:002012-05-30T07:25:59.000-04:00Beautiful, just like all the ancient tales where t...Beautiful, just like all the ancient tales where the fairies steal children. :)Kimberly Gouldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14623715828708451552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-88946259278414810762012-05-31T08:09:54.000-04:002012-05-31T08:09:54.000-04:00...and steal they did! ;-)...and steal they did! ;-)Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-6283418894519245552012-05-31T09:38:24.000-04:002012-05-31T09:38:24.000-04:00The lure of fireflies, certainly I've felt it,...The lure of fireflies, certainly I've felt it, but mine never whisked me away. I must say I was in mind of punishment as well, perhaps we've read too many darkly twisted tales. LOL. I did love the youth of the girl. Oh and her name ;)Rowanwolfhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13725893049379422490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-59414620861556439192012-05-31T10:05:20.000-04:002012-05-31T10:05:20.000-04:00Never trust a fire fly I say! You've a lovely ...Never trust a fire fly I say! You've a lovely childlike voice going on here. :)Meg McNultyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04985840066083718618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-34926086506911485102012-05-31T13:24:05.000-04:002012-05-31T13:24:05.000-04:00Oh my goodness, I love it!Oh my goodness, I love it!sipwritinghttp://sipwriting.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-30576599432334041722012-05-31T14:41:06.000-04:002012-05-31T14:41:06.000-04:00I saw fireflies the other night in my back yard an...I saw fireflies the other night in my back yard and I thought of your story...but I didn't follow them ;)Anna Meadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09004546178112127604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-83459921817546800782012-06-01T09:42:49.000-04:002012-06-01T09:42:49.000-04:00Aww... I love this. You really capture the sweet i...Aww... I love this. You really capture the sweet innocence of a child. I especially like how her tongue was poking out the corner of her mouth :)christinakriegerhttp://christinakrieger.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-88977724874714466742012-06-03T02:56:44.000-04:002012-06-03T02:56:44.000-04:00It was so innocent and yet, the hiker finding the ...It was so innocent and yet, the hiker finding the jar the next day sort of brings it crashing down to reality and you have to wonder: did the firefly queen really protect her, or was there something more sinister a'foot? A wonderful choice in picture and lovely flash-fiction piece to match.Jalisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-56466059683904487242012-06-03T12:21:29.000-04:002012-06-03T12:21:29.000-04:00Thanks for all the comments, I'm glad you enjo...Thanks for all the comments, I'm glad you enjoyed my little tale.Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-52087091394213694882012-06-04T23:38:40.000-04:002012-06-04T23:38:40.000-04:00Wonderful story! I got the impression that she was...Wonderful story! I got the impression that she was led off into a magical adventure that may not have been completely safe.moondusterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01595020500346331076noreply@blogger.com