tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.comments2023-04-14T05:46:16.714-04:00DB McNicol, AuthorDonna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5251125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-46424652563436556862019-06-19T14:21:15.612-04:002019-06-19T14:21:15.612-04:00Thank you...it was extremely well written. My hear...Thank you...it was extremely well written. My heart is breaking into little pieces...Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-61057048121829865662019-06-19T13:09:38.139-04:002019-06-19T13:09:38.139-04:00Wrote from my saddened perspective today. Promise...Wrote from my saddened perspective today. Promise to make next week's more uplifting! Cay D. Hilliardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06761610065314446974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-46756102327997302812019-06-18T20:15:56.576-04:002019-06-18T20:15:56.576-04:00Hmmm, good question! Thanks for visiting, Michael....Hmmm, good question! Thanks for visiting, Michael.Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-43695244024303186812019-06-18T12:04:02.934-04:002019-06-18T12:04:02.934-04:00Wow, surprise ending. Was the fortune teller tryin...Wow, surprise ending. Was the fortune teller trying to save her or pushing her in front of the bullet?Michael Wynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10255072288684840150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-56833325636419231632019-06-18T00:48:53.311-04:002019-06-18T00:48:53.311-04:00Well penned! :)Well penned! :)The Dark Netizenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08529477001757705016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-53569183299546888622019-06-17T14:52:20.837-04:002019-06-17T14:52:20.837-04:00Thanks, Shelley. Will be posting a final post here...Thanks, Shelley. Will be posting a final post here when I transition. This blog will remain for the history, not going to try to port it over to WP.Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-45699835287944452402019-06-17T14:40:07.395-04:002019-06-17T14:40:07.395-04:00There's a better, fuller description in the or...There's a better, fuller description in the original story I linked to at the top...it was fun to research.<br /><br />Yup, him or her...not sure it mattered. LOL!Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-66889198079379479262019-06-17T14:39:20.036-04:002019-06-17T14:39:20.036-04:00Thanks! Appreciate the stop by and read!Thanks! Appreciate the stop by and read!Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-87158394540884783762019-06-17T14:39:02.927-04:002019-06-17T14:39:02.927-04:00Thanks so much, Jade. I appreciate it!Thanks so much, Jade. I appreciate it!Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-50713966599729597022019-06-17T14:02:23.132-04:002019-06-17T14:02:23.132-04:00I was so absorbed in your description of the busin...I was so absorbed in your description of the business with the tea leaves that I was completely shocked at the bullet that killed her? Him? Anyway, really good work!Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12838088100679305391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-14539237268898811182019-06-17T08:49:50.036-04:002019-06-17T08:49:50.036-04:00Ouch... leaving for the imminent danger in tea-lea...Ouch... leaving for the imminent danger in tea-leaves brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-70635646163603165442019-06-17T08:30:11.625-04:002019-06-17T08:30:11.625-04:00Good luck on your transition to WordPress! I chec...Good luck on your transition to WordPress! I checked out your new blog - very nice and clean. I'm following you there too - and hope to join in as I'm able on your Foto Fiction prompts! Happy blogging to you - thanks for keeping us updated on the changes you're working on. Shelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07654791528627207239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-9910254735576022922019-06-15T19:46:22.990-04:002019-06-15T19:46:22.990-04:00Now either the patron's death was imminent no ...Now either the patron's death was imminent no matter where they were at a particular time or the leaf-reader was part of the death plot. In either case tautly told tale!<br />Jade Li@ http://tao-talk.comms_lilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03999098267891256848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-9477660329789194762019-06-15T14:49:03.273-04:002019-06-15T14:49:03.273-04:00Thanks! Appreciate the stop by and the comment.Thanks! Appreciate the stop by and the comment.Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-46754576631444309852019-06-15T14:47:54.687-04:002019-06-15T14:47:54.687-04:00I loved the description of the tea leaves reading,...I loved the description of the tea leaves reading, what a great idea for the prompt. That poor protagonist though, having to tell the story as a ghost. He probably doesn't quite know what's happening yet.Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-54059272784505740982019-06-15T12:24:29.964-04:002019-06-15T12:24:29.964-04:00This comment has been hidden from the blog.Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-63061145899414903862019-06-15T10:48:12.570-04:002019-06-15T10:48:12.570-04:00This comment has been hidden from the blog.Joe Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11905496649700914777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-22593180696451014992019-06-15T00:27:55.616-04:002019-06-15T00:27:55.616-04:00I know - fate. ;)I know - fate. ;)Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-41786439572030492272019-06-14T23:43:26.398-04:002019-06-14T23:43:26.398-04:00What an original take on the prompt! He/she stood ...What an original take on the prompt! He/she stood no chance it would appear...Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026707232212719793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-84714900130326927052019-06-14T14:15:28.355-04:002019-06-14T14:15:28.355-04:00I know...makes you wonder, doesn't it!I know...makes you wonder, doesn't it!Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-41714178167736904482019-06-14T14:13:44.057-04:002019-06-14T14:13:44.057-04:00Oh wow. That's a good one. Makes me want to ...Oh wow. That's a good one. Makes me want to read more! <br /><br /><a href="https://scr4pl80.wordpress.com/" rel="nofollow">Janet’s Smiles</a>Janethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10949606196473376619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-56571889978143427322019-06-14T13:25:35.204-04:002019-06-14T13:25:35.204-04:00A splendid thriller!A splendid thriller!kittysverseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13257099985379224150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-1950317068274953692019-06-14T11:36:16.668-04:002019-06-14T11:36:16.668-04:00Thanks, Suzanne. So glad you liked it. It was a fu...Thanks, Suzanne. So glad you liked it. It was a fun write...Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-33916159156085761622019-06-14T11:35:55.982-04:002019-06-14T11:35:55.982-04:00Awww, thank you! I did include a link at the top t...Awww, thank you! I did include a link at the top to the full(er) story from my A to Z collection. You might enjoy that as well. Much appreciate the visit!Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-4771146353973610782019-06-14T09:27:22.674-04:002019-06-14T09:27:22.674-04:00What a shame. There should be a back door to the p...What a shame. There should be a back door to the place. I wonder if she loses many customers that way. A good story, Donna. Good writing. :) --- SuzanneP.S. Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05115966559427725610noreply@blogger.com