tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post1614233849248258195..comments2023-04-14T05:46:16.714-04:00Comments on DB McNicol, Author: #AtoZchallenge: Esquivar or EludeDonna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-61711483389276245872014-04-07T02:30:06.762-04:002014-04-07T02:30:06.762-04:00I am truly astounded and delighted every time I vi...I am truly astounded and delighted every time I visit on the A to Z. Your flash fiction says so much in so few words. A mark of an accomplished writer. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-12398207858658886392014-04-06T17:08:13.766-04:002014-04-06T17:08:13.766-04:00Ooooohhhh, nice! Good punch at the end, too :)
Th...Ooooohhhh, nice! Good punch at the end, too :)<br /><br />Thanks for the visit at <a href="http://guilie-castillo-oriard.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow"> Quiet Laughter </a> :)Guilie Castillohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09006999087139126972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-60824340520510920642014-04-06T14:40:58.039-04:002014-04-06T14:40:58.039-04:00Great theme! I need something like that to make me...Great theme! I need something like that to make me write shorter more concise posts! Nice sense of movement in your writing.<br />Stopping by from #atozchallenge. rosmaceachern.blogspot.com @rosmaceachernAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02604009091757038815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-4609775284868975532014-04-06T14:26:03.032-04:002014-04-06T14:26:03.032-04:00Well done. Love the theme.Well done. Love the theme.Geri Jeterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10697986655069268220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-74316464483333802262014-04-06T13:16:47.117-04:002014-04-06T13:16:47.117-04:00Well done, Donna. I hope his mother is what he'...Well done, Donna. I hope his mother is what he's hoped for. :)Veronica Sicoehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03741318844378921184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-13466543946102146592014-04-06T12:39:49.738-04:002014-04-06T12:39:49.738-04:00Great cliffhanger! I'm definitely interested.Great cliffhanger! I'm definitely interested.J.H. Moncrieffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18045467689291025137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-11711566830127664582014-04-06T11:57:56.247-04:002014-04-06T11:57:56.247-04:00Thank you everyone for all your wonderful comments...Thank you everyone for all your wonderful comments. I've been trying to individually reply but find that is cutting into my time to read YOUR blogs. I hope you will keep visiting and reading!Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-56833514932524687442014-04-06T03:28:19.873-04:002014-04-06T03:28:19.873-04:00So much depth! Nicely done in just 10 lines :) Adi...So much depth! Nicely done in just 10 lines :) <a href="http://www.makeitbeayoutiful.blogspot.in" rel="nofollow">Aditi, A2Z participant</a>Aditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07881690136782545422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-86008794655381731772014-04-05T22:02:48.077-04:002014-04-05T22:02:48.077-04:00Wow. You are really rockin' this. My heart hur...Wow. You are really rockin' this. My heart hurt for this kid. Ten lines, and I'm already invested.Lynda Dietzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15442214431341019380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-38952234967492113682014-04-05T21:30:36.714-04:002014-04-05T21:30:36.714-04:00A compelling 10x10, especially that newspaper clip...A compelling 10x10, especially that newspaper clipping. His emotions are shown so clearly. My heart goes out to this young boy, and doesn't the reader know there's trouble ahead! Write on!Beth Camphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12682622561621269515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-37077570221284142842014-04-05T18:20:21.602-04:002014-04-05T18:20:21.602-04:00Great excerpt, Donna. Love the image you leave us ...Great excerpt, Donna. Love the image you leave us with at the end ... meeting his mother. <br />Silvia @<br /><a href="%E2%80%9D/silviatomasvillalobos.wordpress.com/%E2%80%9D" rel="nofollow">SilviaWrites</a>Silvia Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14437144517262211712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-3746091418844838722014-04-05T17:40:31.205-04:002014-04-05T17:40:31.205-04:00Nicely done.Nicely done.Bob Sanchezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08350825385315155962noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-46947832377748150422014-04-05T16:46:35.516-04:002014-04-05T16:46:35.516-04:00Powerful. :) I enjoyed it a lot. Will pop by ag...Powerful. :) I enjoyed it a lot. Will pop by again to see what you have as the month goes on. Flash pieces are always a great challenge for writer's to hone their craft. Great job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-67885437007322055932014-04-05T13:51:41.805-04:002014-04-05T13:51:41.805-04:00Great ending. I hope that meeting his mother is ev...Great ending. I hope that meeting his mother is everything he dreams of.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-35795902189984496782014-04-05T13:25:48.906-04:002014-04-05T13:25:48.906-04:00good last line. I write drabbles also but flexible...good last line. I write drabbles also but flexible in number of sentencesAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-24020777493433012632014-04-05T08:38:03.325-04:002014-04-05T08:38:03.325-04:00Ah the old ten by ten, nice flash really embedded ...Ah the old ten by ten, nice flash really embedded the scene :)sjphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05772883091207430753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-30871359203538472692014-04-05T08:32:47.522-04:002014-04-05T08:32:47.522-04:00Thanks for stopping by our blog earlier. Love your...Thanks for stopping by our blog earlier. Love your story. The ending was not what I expected but it made the story even better.<br /><br />Sean at <a href="http://hisandherhobbies.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">His and Her Hobbies</a>Sean @ His And Her Hobbieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02957976361757525524noreply@blogger.com