tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post418373713259114497..comments2023-04-14T05:46:16.714-04:00Comments on DB McNicol, Author: Flight [Five Sentence Fiction]Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-8595990642166545632013-07-08T14:19:19.340-04:002013-07-08T14:19:19.340-04:00Very original and powerful use of the prompt, Donn...Very original and powerful use of the prompt, Donna. Great imagery. You conveyed her desperation to flee to vividly. I hope she got that door open in time. <br /><br />http://injaynesworld.blogspot.com/2013/07/injaynesworld-its-nature-of-flight.htmlJayne Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01053366144206401836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-68431677445546558382013-07-08T10:55:24.283-04:002013-07-08T10:55:24.283-04:00Thank you, I hoped it conveyed her fear and his ar...Thank you, I hoped it conveyed her fear and his arrogance.Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-89775102418072948282013-07-08T10:30:09.712-04:002013-07-08T10:30:09.712-04:00I hope she was lighter on her feet than he was. H...I hope she was lighter on her feet than he was. How sad that there are so many people out there in abusive circumstances. An intense piece. Very powerful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-78042246679858969112013-07-07T19:39:32.703-04:002013-07-07T19:39:32.703-04:00Thanks, Barbara. I suspect he didn't allow her...Thanks, Barbara. I suspect he didn't allow her to own a cell phone. :(Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-69990505014894165302013-07-07T17:48:34.353-04:002013-07-07T17:48:34.353-04:00Turn that door knob and run!!! I hope she had her...Turn that door knob and run!!! I hope she had her cell phone in her hand with 911 dialed in. Poor thing. A true life read. <br /><br />Barbara @ www.allmylivesnow.comallmylivesnowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13313979624504540722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-69387114674059095472013-07-07T11:48:56.153-04:002013-07-07T11:48:56.153-04:00Thanks, Rosalind. Here's hoping she made it ou...Thanks, Rosalind. Here's hoping she made it out the door... ;-)Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-12737606293137600062013-07-07T11:45:30.135-04:002013-07-07T11:45:30.135-04:00Thanks Lizzie, nice to see you pop in. Off to read...Thanks Lizzie, nice to see you pop in. Off to read yours!Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-90134994617775287872013-07-07T08:46:32.687-04:002013-07-07T08:46:32.687-04:00Just run Davina. She should have hit him harder.....Just run Davina. She should have hit him harder.. Be cool to know what happens next..xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-38921636034815135092013-07-07T08:20:23.222-04:002013-07-07T08:20:23.222-04:00So much tension is created here and the will for h...So much tension is created here and the will for her to escape the brutal relationship she is in. A fab read. xx<br /><br /><br /> This is such a heartbreaking piece. I could feel her solitude and despair. A really vivid piece of writing. xx<br /><br /><br />http://40somethingundomesticateddevil.blogspot.co.uk/2013/07/5-sentence-fiction-flight-part-5-zoe-as.html Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-15225925194370771792013-07-06T21:34:40.082-04:002013-07-06T21:34:40.082-04:00Thanks, Christine!Thanks, Christine!Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-91550715214467172682013-07-06T21:34:24.678-04:002013-07-06T21:34:24.678-04:00Thank you, Maggie. I did some volunteer work being...Thank you, Maggie. I did some volunteer work being the on-call overnight person. I'll never forget one call I took and I always wondered if she got out and got out unscathed.Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-51393710103559583862013-07-06T20:44:34.535-04:002013-07-06T20:44:34.535-04:00Oh oh! Intense little piece.Oh oh! Intense little piece.Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-56535829352742726502013-07-06T20:02:04.633-04:002013-07-06T20:02:04.633-04:00I used to work with women in a marriage/relationsh...I used to work with women in a marriage/relationship of violence. Statistically, when the woman tries to leave is when most homicides occur. It is so frightening helping a woman to plan that moment of leaving and terrifying knowing when she is going to go through with it. Nice write and very realistic.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-6204810514245410202013-07-06T11:19:51.651-04:002013-07-06T11:19:51.651-04:00Thanks, Ann. Now I'm off to read the other ent...Thanks, Ann. Now I'm off to read the other entries. :)Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-23408551922823427492013-07-06T08:02:21.115-04:002013-07-06T08:02:21.115-04:00Oh, my...this sounds intense. I would like to know...Oh, my...this sounds intense. I would like to know more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com