tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post4348722671843542695..comments2023-04-14T05:46:16.714-04:00Comments on DB McNicol, Author: Candy [five sentence fiction]Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-57656857273735264822012-05-05T01:48:12.000-04:002012-05-05T01:48:12.000-04:00Excellent piece of flash fiction, Donna :) I'm...Excellent piece of flash fiction, Donna :) I'm sure children's dentists would approve of your cautionary tale!Catherine Noblehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04779799397032396279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-46314116881295348182012-05-05T02:37:32.000-04:002012-05-05T02:37:32.000-04:00Great job Donna! Love the visual I got when readin...Great job Donna! Love the visual I got when reading this short piece.Christina M. McKnighthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09556438221251810456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-13830220925066987222012-05-05T05:26:04.000-04:002012-05-05T05:26:04.000-04:00So well written with a wonderful out of the blue t...So well written with a wonderful out of the blue twist!! Could see and smell the cotton candy as I was reading too.Jo-Anne (jtvancouver)http://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-92041326022262863992012-05-05T06:23:12.000-04:002012-05-05T06:23:12.000-04:00Okay, I'm officially creeped out! Well done!Okay, I'm officially creeped out! Well done!Texas Yellow Rosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18416672836387064595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-48280064744557407022012-05-05T06:34:55.000-04:002012-05-05T06:34:55.000-04:00I agree with TX Yellow Rose - a wee bit creepy!I agree with TX Yellow Rose - a wee bit creepy!Jaye Robin Brownhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03929739858812153990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-13630598061853019192012-05-05T07:23:24.000-04:002012-05-05T07:23:24.000-04:00@Catherine: LOL! Never thought about that. [giggle...@Catherine: LOL! Never thought about that. [giggle]<br><br>@Christina: Thanks, Christina. Flash is really helping me tune my writing.<br><br>@Jo-Anne: I really started with a sweet memoir but then it twisted when I found the cotton candy photo.<br><br>@Betty [Texas Yellow Rose] & @Jaye: That was the intent...glad I succeeded.Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-83697221233145865882012-05-05T14:43:06.000-04:002012-05-05T14:43:06.000-04:00Yikes!Yikes!Beth Zimmermanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07047047792782914757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-50253197661343101962012-05-05T16:45:05.000-04:002012-05-05T16:45:05.000-04:00Oooh! I agree with the folks above, Very creepy. G...Oooh! I agree with the folks above, Very creepy. Great job!From Traciehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07908908021649000930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-17113536974599528332012-05-06T06:18:45.000-04:002012-05-06T06:18:45.000-04:00Hi Beth & Tracie, thanks for stopping in and c...Hi Beth & Tracie, thanks for stopping in and commenting. It was meant to be creepy...glad it worked. LOL!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-57709701133362402722012-05-06T06:47:09.000-04:002012-05-06T06:47:09.000-04:00Totally brilliant idea! And went well with the ph...Totally brilliant idea! And went well with the photo. Rally well done.Sandra Crookhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-17056162124078956702012-05-06T07:14:48.000-04:002012-05-06T07:14:48.000-04:00Thanks Sandra...this was the third photo. It chang...Thanks Sandra...this was the third photo. It changed as the story evolved....LOL!Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-43926313201478954312012-05-06T15:09:41.000-04:002012-05-06T15:09:41.000-04:00Very creepy -- and imaginative!Very creepy -- and imaginative!Allan Douglashttp://allandouglas.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-69408592615795306672012-05-07T03:19:25.000-04:002012-05-07T03:19:25.000-04:00Love the evil intent creeping into something so in...Love the evil intent creeping into something so innocent!Lisa Shambrookhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-76687958545623456672012-05-07T11:03:20.000-04:002012-05-07T11:03:20.000-04:00Thanks, Allan.Thanks, Allan.Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-28229918147925916962012-05-07T11:09:42.000-04:002012-05-07T11:09:42.000-04:00Thanks Lisa...it sort of wrote itself. ;-)Thanks Lisa...it sort of wrote itself. ;-)Donna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.com