tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post8556205486572271362..comments2023-04-14T05:46:16.714-04:00Comments on DB McNicol, Author: DOOR - Five Sentence Fiction #SaturdayScenes #SSFlashFictionDonna B. McNicolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-6391216360171538012014-05-14T17:37:56.733-04:002014-05-14T17:37:56.733-04:00Glad everyone enjoyed it and thanks for stopping b...Glad everyone enjoyed it and thanks for stopping by and commenting!Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-41884533414784208752014-05-14T08:54:38.184-04:002014-05-14T08:54:38.184-04:00I can see how your story could go either way. Perh...I can see how your story could go either way. Perhaps the next time that hppens you can treat us to both!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-88325847945528135772014-05-12T11:26:23.827-04:002014-05-12T11:26:23.827-04:00Didn't expect this tale to read to a rescue, f...Didn't expect this tale to read to a rescue, fab xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00971686377049763453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-17115370920085374242014-05-11T11:20:53.277-04:002014-05-11T11:20:53.277-04:00Wow, thought it was going to be thriller, horror, ...Wow, thought it was going to be thriller, horror, ghosty and then the cupiest thing ever, rescuing a little pup! Great work. Miranda Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11166000575283710451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-27147600503360268572014-05-11T09:18:45.048-04:002014-05-11T09:18:45.048-04:00Whoaaa...you saved this piece from going dark ;) L...Whoaaa...you saved this piece from going dark ;) Loved the sweet ending! :)Aditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07881690136782545422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-79718458437728261032014-05-11T04:51:14.878-04:002014-05-11T04:51:14.878-04:00Poor puppy :) It's funny how much of a fine li...Poor puppy :) It's funny how much of a fine line there can be between dark and uplifting.sjphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05772883091207430753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-72771108543372304592014-05-11T00:26:27.691-04:002014-05-11T00:26:27.691-04:00Thank you ALL for stopping by and commenting...I a...Thank you ALL for stopping by and commenting...I almost went dark at the end but preferred the image of a puppy rescue. ;)Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-60031142999223806272014-05-10T23:52:42.918-04:002014-05-10T23:52:42.918-04:00I love the happy ending, great twist after the ten...I love the happy ending, great twist after the tense build-up. I was so sure something sinister was going to happen! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-3493527498308032342014-05-10T22:53:20.928-04:002014-05-10T22:53:20.928-04:00That is one of a twist ending .. Great.. :)That is one of a twist ending .. Great.. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-30242628909986761452014-05-10T14:44:29.277-04:002014-05-10T14:44:29.277-04:00Okay you had me seriously worried initially!! But ...Okay you had me seriously worried initially!! But a wonderful ending. :D Cute.. Donna Burmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15875215280123607507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-3982964282686496342014-05-10T14:05:28.034-04:002014-05-10T14:05:28.034-04:00This is the cutest!! Such a gorgeous ending after ...This is the cutest!! Such a gorgeous ending after the tense build up. x Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-76665828195755746682014-05-10T13:42:03.002-04:002014-05-10T13:42:03.002-04:00So cute! I was as nervous as she was as she went i...So cute! I was as nervous as she was as she went in...great ending! Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963015679650968932.post-46676919319325494172014-05-10T12:26:31.877-04:002014-05-10T12:26:31.877-04:00What a sweet ending.What a sweet ending.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05362288878349942148noreply@blogger.com