My A to Z Challenge: Micro fiction, using 300 words or less, inspired by selected words along with a photo for inspiration. The words were chosen in reverse order from this lesson plan page.
(For example, for the letter A it was the 26th word on the list, for Z it was the 1st word on the list)
(For example, for the letter A it was the 26th word on the list, for Z it was the 1st word on the list)
They were known as the Rodrigo brothers. They were born in Portugal on September ninth, one year apart from each other. They were itinerant musicians, playing their vintage xylophone at carnivals and other traveling shows.
Tiago and Paulo were now in their eighties and still touring. Wherever they went, rumors flowed about what happened when they played. Some said they were hypnotized and only woke when the duo stopped playing. Others said they had never felt better, even after the music ended.
But not all the rumors were good ones. You see Tiago and Paulo had a few disabilities from birth. Tiago, the oldest, was blind in his left eye. Paulo, the youngest, was blind in his right eye. They never wore sunglasses to hide these issues and they never hesitated staring at their audience.
Needless to say, their stares could be a bit creepy. The more superstitious among the crowd accused them of casting the evil eye and bewitching some of those watching.
Today was no different, except for the fact it was their first time back in Portugal since they were youngsters and their final performance anywhere. They stepped up to the xylophone, tapped a few notes, and broke into a lively folk tune. Soon everyone was clapping and stamping their feet.
Their final song was subdued, somewhat eerie, and as they played they stared into the crowd. Each brother seemed to seek out one specific person. A young person.
The tune lingered in the air and vibrated with the notes. A strong wind arose, blinding everyone with dust and debris. Once settled, the stage was empty.
Stranger yet, three young people in the audience were seen strolling off arm in arm. One blind in the left eye, one blind in the right eye, and one totally blind.
Spooky! Hits you in the gut.
ReplyDeleteI think your challenge must be harder than mine. You have to write about a specific prompt on a specific day. I can at least choose which prompt to use when.
This is the third time I've done flash fiction, or maybe the fourth (lost count). This one has been the hardest because of the every day words. Thank goodness I found photos that helped inspire me!
DeleteIt was as if they'd discovered their younger selves, An intriguing tale indeed.
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So many ways to interpret, right?
DeleteVery good. I had a hint of what was coming but not the third person.
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It's all in your interpretation....thanks for continuing to stop by and read/comment.
DeleteThat is the largest xylophone I have ever seen. Great character development in your story. The ending was unexpected but satisfying in its uniqueness.
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Ah, thank you, Gail (I hope to get caught up on your stories over the next couple of days...)
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ReplyDeleteInteresting story about these xylophone players. Quite a bit different from my A2Z Little Mermaid art sketch 'Xylophone Player' character. Thanks for visiting. We're just about through the alphabet!
Definitely way different from your story...but I SOOOO love your drawings!
DeleteWhich is why I have always preferred the Glockenspiel . . . .
ReplyDeleteThanks for a much needed laugh, Rob.
DeleteThe third person was an interesting twist. Makes you wonder about a lifetime with the three together at the carnivals.
ReplyDeleteSo many ways the story could go, right?
DeleteThat is, indeed, a spooky tale. Three? That was unexpected.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, the xylophone pic brought back memories from my childhood. I used to have a toy one back then. Never seen a xylophone after that though.
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I remember my kids having a toy xylophone and I've seen them on television but not sure I've ever seen one in real life. Thanks so much for stopping by!
DeleteThe twist of the three blind men at the end really threw me... LOL Funny interpretation of this photo.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it. I'm finally off ot read the last of my A-Z blog list. Phew!
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