Thursday, April 10, 2014

#AtoZchallenge: Impudico or Immodest

Impudico (Spanish) or Immodest (English)
She stormed up the stairs, tearing off her clothing along the way and tossing them on the bed.

"Who does he think he is, telling me how to dress, telling me I'm being immodest? He's not my father!"

She flounced across the room and opened her closet, examining her wardrobe choices.

"There is nothing wrong with this...or this...or this..."

She rifled through the clothes and added them to the growing pile behind her, finally settling on a sundress that covered most of her upper torso and came down to her knees.

"I hope this satisfies him, the pompous jerk!"

As she pulled it on she heard the front door slam, "Must be him."

Heavy footsteps rang out behind her and she whirled to face him, arms stiffly at her side, her tongue laced with sarcasm and asked, "Is this satisfactory, my dear Ken?

He pulled her close and whispered, "Yes it is. I'm sorry but I don't like other men gawking at you, Barbie."

My theme is 10x10.
A maximum of ten sentences, a minimum of 100 words.
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  1. Replies
    1. I admit to struggling a bit with this one so decided to go for a little humor. ;)

  2. Hate the doll picture but loved the humorous flash today. Good one! :)

  3. Interesting scene. :)

  4. HA! Because everyone knows Barbies never stay clothed for long.

  5. I like what you did with this. Barbie is dressed. :)


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