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Monday, May 28, 2012

Firefly Glitter [#Faerypin]

Once again I find myself dabbling in fantasy. My first foray earned no comments so I suspect I have a long way to go, but here is another stab. The fantastic Anna Meade at Yearning for Wonderland is hosting a contest, Faerytaleish Pinterest Contest, based upon photos that have been uploaded to her Pinterest board: Faerytaleish. The contest closes on June 1 and all entries must be 300 words or less and include the photo that inspired the story.
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Running around the back yard with her Mason jar, Stacie paused as her mom shouted from the back porch, "Ten more minutes, then it's time to come in."

She started to holler back but heard, "...and leave those creepy bugs outside!"

With a shrug of her shoulders Stacie continued chasing the fireflies. She loved them, so glittery and bright. They made her laugh and turned her insides all giggly.

Enchanted by a new group of fireflies, she darted towards them, chasing the dancing lights through the tall grass colored by a tapestry of wildflowers. She was too entranced to notice they were drawing her closer and closer to the forest at the edge of the property.


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"A Flash of Fantasy"
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24 comments:

  1. Beth ZimmermanMay 28, 2012 at 9:46 AM

    So very awesome! I love this. And I enjoyed your other piece too although it was darker and more creepy. I really thought I commented. Happy Memorial Day, Donna!

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  2. Donna B. McNicolMay 28, 2012 at 10:00 AM

    You were my only commenter, Beth, and I knew I creeped you out. LOL! Thanks so much for being such a faithful reader!!

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  3. ajjrichmondMay 28, 2012 at 11:59 AM

    That's the photo I was considering using! This is so well written, and I just love the unknown ending. I want to know more!

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  4. Lisa ShambrookMay 28, 2012 at 12:19 PM

    I love the images you've put in my head...dancing fireflies and an innocent young thing chasing after them! Wonder where they took her?

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  5. Donna B. McNicolMay 28, 2012 at 12:32 PM

    I wonder if there will be any doubles...will be interesting.

    I now have several tales that need to be expanded but need to get my two novels done first. LOL!

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  6. Donna B. McNicolMay 28, 2012 at 12:34 PM

    Thanks, Lisa. I could see her dancing around...I love fireflies myself. Not sure where they took her but someday I plan to find out!

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  7. Mary MaddoxMay 28, 2012 at 1:10 PM

    Great story. I love "What's a future?"

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  8. Donna B. McNicolMay 28, 2012 at 2:14 PM

    It really helps to have young grandchildren around...LOL!

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  9. Anna MeadeMay 28, 2012 at 2:39 PM

    This captures youth and innocence beautifully, Donna. Thank you for entering!

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  10. Cameron WritesMay 28, 2012 at 11:17 PM

    That was excellent. I wondered if she might be "punished" for putting the fireflies in a jar. Sorry Imissed your other entry - I've been back and read it.

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  11. sjpMay 29, 2012 at 12:48 AM

    Wow, last line felt a little dark in comparison, loved the light colourful mood, must say was caught up by several pinterest boards last night after your post few days back :)

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  12. Donna B. McNicolMay 29, 2012 at 2:46 AM

    You and the other regulars continue to inspire me!

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  13. Donna B. McNicolMay 29, 2012 at 2:48 AM

    LOL! Never thought about the possible punishing, what a good twist that would be.

    Thanks for checking out my other fantasy tale. We "bikers" & "van folks" gotta stick together!

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  14. Donna B. McNicolMay 29, 2012 at 2:49 AM

    Thanks for taking time to read and comment. The last line seemed like a must for the folks left back at home. The original draft was much longer and went into foster parents left behind.

    Yup, Pinterest gets ya hooked!

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  15. Kimberly GouldMay 30, 2012 at 7:25 AM

    Beautiful, just like all the ancient tales where the fairies steal children. :)

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  16. Donna B. McNicolMay 31, 2012 at 8:09 AM

    ...and steal they did! ;-)

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  17. RowanwolfMay 31, 2012 at 9:38 AM

    The lure of fireflies, certainly I've felt it, but mine never whisked me away. I must say I was in mind of punishment as well, perhaps we've read too many darkly twisted tales. LOL. I did love the youth of the girl. Oh and her name ;)

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  18. Meg McNultyMay 31, 2012 at 10:05 AM

    Never trust a fire fly I say! You've a lovely childlike voice going on here. :)

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  19. sipwritingMay 31, 2012 at 1:24 PM

    Oh my goodness, I love it!

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  20. Anna MeadeMay 31, 2012 at 2:41 PM

    I saw fireflies the other night in my back yard and I thought of your story...but I didn't follow them ;)

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  21. christinakriegerJune 1, 2012 at 9:42 AM

    Aww... I love this. You really capture the sweet innocence of a child. I especially like how her tongue was poking out the corner of her mouth :)

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  22. JalisaJune 3, 2012 at 2:56 AM

    It was so innocent and yet, the hiker finding the jar the next day sort of brings it crashing down to reality and you have to wonder: did the firefly queen really protect her, or was there something more sinister a'foot? A wonderful choice in picture and lovely flash-fiction piece to match.

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  23. Donna B. McNicolJune 3, 2012 at 12:21 PM

    Thanks for all the comments, I'm glad you enjoyed my little tale.

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  24. moondusterJune 4, 2012 at 11:38 PM

    Wonderful story! I got the impression that she was led off into a magical adventure that may not have been completely safe.

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