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My theme is 10x10. A maximum of ten sentences, a minimum of 100 words.
Dark figures danced around the fire, throwing long shadows that melted into the darkness surrounding them. The air vibrated and hummed around the dancers; the watchers sat mesmerized as though drugged.
Another great post with atwist.Scary lady with the black eyes.
ReplyDeleteWell that gave me a laugh. Love the little twist at the end, had me going!
ReplyDelete@CassamThanks, the ending kind of wrote itself and caught me by surprise as well. LOL!
ReplyDelete@Bish DenhamGlad you enjoyed it, I wrote and rewrote and it took that little twist all by itself. ;-)
ReplyDeleteI too liked the twist and the smile. I was wondering where the story was going, Donna! Really good:))
ReplyDeleteGorgeous - imagination at work, or was it *just* imagination?
ReplyDeleteA great short-short.
@KjM Welcome to my blog, glad you're enjoying the stories. Now to keep it up for the rest of the alphabet. LOL!
ReplyDeleteWow, quite a turn at the end! A surprise and I loved the imagery leading up to it.
ReplyDeleteThis = AWESOME! :)
ReplyDeleteOOOOh you broke the spell with the last line.
ReplyDelete--Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2012
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Nice twist! Very nicely done!! :)
ReplyDeleteI like your theme of 10x10. The earlier story with the verandah, had a wistful sorrowful feel.
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ReplyDeleteNice and interesting post for D.
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Yikes! This was a little "dark" for me but I loved the ending!
ReplyDeleteI loved the ending too! Glad I'm finally catching up with your AtoZ posts.
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