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My theme is 10x10.
A maximum of ten sentences, a minimum of 100 words.
A maximum of ten sentences, a minimum of 100 words.
Fall was her favorite season and she had always enjoyed her outings in the cold, crisp air, looking at the ice laden trees and listening to the frosty leaves crunching underfoot. She tried to remember the smells, the sounds, the sights from her hundreds of walks.
Very cool theme for the challenge. I like this post very much.
ReplyDeleteKaren
One can certainly say that that is a "cool" story.
ReplyDeleteOh gasp! I was NOT expecting that ending.
ReplyDeleteOh you are cruel! Please let someone hear her,she'll never see her family again.
ReplyDeleteThe beginning sets up that jarring twist. Nice meeting you. :)
ReplyDeleteWow, totally not expecting that.
ReplyDeleteWhat an unexpected twist... I didn't see that coming, not at all!
ReplyDeleteGreat story. And great ending!
ReplyDeleteSo there is more? Yes? When? I'm waiting here until you hear my scream! Fortunately I'm not tied to my chair...or in the freezer. But my feet are cold and I don't want to get up, if that means anything. I'll wait. (another scream)
ReplyDeleteLovely little piece---I'm impressed with whatyou do in such a short space.
ReplyDelete--Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2012
Twitter: @AprilA2Z
#atozchallenge
Oh, ack! You drew me in then slapped me. Love it!
ReplyDeleteShannon at The Warrior Muse, co-host of the 2012 #atozchallenge! Twitter: @AprilA2Z
Thanks everyone, looks like it had the effect I wanted. Wish I could manage this for all the letters. Okay, time to sit down and work on O-Z.
ReplyDeleteWhoa! The beautiful picture belies the terrible twist. What an awful fate. But very well done!
ReplyDeleteI don't like thrillers. Here's where I hide my face or walk out of the cinema.. Well done. Lovely writing.
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