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My theme is 10x10.
A maximum of ten sentences, a minimum of 100 words.
A maximum of ten sentences, a minimum of 100 words.
He hefted the chain and decided it was just what he needed. It was time for to get even and he needed to find his first victim, he was a novice after all. Once he had done this several times, he'd be less worried about the results.
I loved this piece! Really enjoyed the twist you put on it...letting the reader think its sinister and then ...not. Unique piece.
ReplyDeleteWhew! Had me worried there for a minute. ;) Yes, wonderful wee twist at the end. I could breathe again!
ReplyDeleteNice twist - what a change of tone!
ReplyDeleteThat's nice.. I can read nice. I'm a woose when it comes to scary.. Hope you're enjoying the challenge and thanks for dropping by mine.
ReplyDeleteThat ended well :)
ReplyDeleteLook forward to your challenge run…can’t believe we’ve had 14 days already!
--Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2012
Twitter: @AprilA2Z
#atozchallenge
Wow! Really well written ... had my heart solidly lodged in my throat! So glad it ended well!
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone...I'm enjoying finding the twists at the end.
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice personal challenge. Thanks for linking up with us. You're welcome to grab the code so you can share the rest of our linked posts with your readers.
ReplyDeletePhew! You won't believe the sense of relief at the end... had me going there...
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