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My theme is 10x10.
A maximum of ten sentences, a minimum of 100 words.
A maximum of ten sentences, a minimum of 100 words.
Her mama always told her people got arrested in NYC for jaywalking but she never believed her. Now she was in a holding tank at the local precinct, wondering what happened and worst, what was going to happen.
The moral: Never count out loud. People will look at you funny and figure you can't do math.
ReplyDeleteNice glimpse inside of her brain.
ReplyDeleteGood follow up! (Though I now realize it should be jayewalking...har, har)
ReplyDeleteThe chance of me having a nap to wake up from is not very great. Good story from you as usual.
ReplyDeletelol! That's fantastic!
ReplyDeleteI like the really tight third person POV, how you only give so much away. Very nicely done. Always pays to listen to your mama...:)
ReplyDeleteI like this a lot. Good job.
ReplyDeleteGlad everyone enjoyed it...I had fun writing it!
ReplyDeleteGreat job at creating this unique character in such a small space. Definitely feels like a character you could do more with in the future.
ReplyDeleteWishing you continued success with the A to Z challenge,
Jocelyn
Obssessive-compulsive or loony tunes?
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff!
Took this one several directions before hitting on the real "character". Glad everyone enjoyed it.
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